bonjour, J'ai un oral en anglais on me demande de presenter un aventurier de mon choix je pense qu'il y a quelque fautes, pouvez-vous m'aider à les corriger sv

bonjour,
J'ai un oral en anglais on me demande de presenter un aventurier de mon choix je pense qu'il y a quelque fautes, pouvez-vous m'aider à les corriger svp?

André Brugiroux born November 11, 1937 in Villeneuve-Saint-Georges is a globe-trotter and French writer who has visited all the countries and territories of the world between 1955 and 2005, the latter being the Mustang. He was named "the greatest traveler existing on Earth" in 2007. He made a documentary film about his travels. Having lived before the war he wanted to meet the man of the world to find out if there will be a day of peace.He meet the arrest in Syria, it is taken for a spy of Israel and Colombia for hijacker.His first trip to Scotland is there to learn English and returned to France only after 18 years.
I have chosen this adventurer because I did not know he was interested in everything his trip with 1 euro per day by hitchhiking.