Svp vous voulez bien corriger les erreurs de mon texte en anglais. I féte my twelve years on February 22 and I celebrated with my friends at bouligue then we'll
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Svp vous voulez bien corriger les erreurs de mon texte en anglais.
I féte my twelve years on February 22 and I celebrated with my friends at bouligue then we'll eat at Mc Donalds then we'll go home to open the followed gifts. My family and will cover part we will cover and many other games he will not need you to bring drinks.
You may wish to bring chips?
At the end of my féte be given a large packet of candy for everyone
My birthday will start 16 o'clock in the afternoon and will end in the evening midnights.
I hope that you will come to my birthday.
See you soon,
I féte my twelve years on February 22 and I celebrated with my friends at bouligue then we'll eat at Mc Donalds then we'll go home to open the followed gifts. My family and will cover part we will cover and many other games he will not need you to bring drinks.
You may wish to bring chips?
At the end of my féte be given a large packet of candy for everyone
My birthday will start 16 o'clock in the afternoon and will end in the evening midnights.
I hope that you will come to my birthday.
See you soon,
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1. Réponse kayla23
I'm becoming 12 years old on the 22nd of February. I will celebrate it with my friends at bouligue, then we will eat at Mc Donalds and then we will go home to open the gifts. My parents will cover many games and the drinks. You may wish to bring with you chips.
At the end of my birthday, everyone will be given a large packet of candy.
My birthday starts at 4 o'clock in the afternoon and will end at midnight (si tu veux que ca se finit a minuit )
I hope you can make it.
See you soon